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Break Free

21:28 Dec 01 2008
Times Read: 574


Im Locked Inside This Cold Dark Place



I See Nothing but Dakness And Empty Space



Im Bound To The Floor, Chained You See



I Need To Hold On, And I Need To Break Free



My World Is Spinning So Much Faster



I Dont Know How Long I Can Last



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Im Stuck In This Place, Cant Shake This Fear



That Some How Some Way Death IS Near



I Call Out Your Name



Then Hang My Head In Shame



For You Are Who Im Trying To Leave



But I Just Cant Seem To Break Free



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Lay Down My Desires, Lay Down My Fears



I Cannot See For My Eyes Are Filled With Tears



I Need To Let Go, Need To Break Free



Some How I Need To Make My Self See-



Who You Really Are Inside



For Its You Not Me, the One Who's Died



Im Sick Of All The Lies And The Pain



With You Theres Nothing Left To Gain



I Need To Get Out i Need To Berak Free



Before Im Bound Forever And Become Lost At Sea.


COMMENTS

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lonlydreamer4life
lonlydreamer4life
19:24 Aug 31 2011

fer evers ago.. wow i forgot how good i used to be at writing XP





 

All I Wanted

07:44 Dec 01 2008
Times Read: 587


You Were Nothing BUt A Waste Of Time

Not So Much As Even A Sign



I Told You I Loved You

And Yet In Return



I Get Repaid With Hurt, And Not So Much As A Lesson Learned



All I Wanted Was To Be With You

I Knew Things Were To Good To Be True



You Reached Right In

And Ripped My Heart Out



Now All I Have Are Questions And Doubts



All I Ever Wanted Was There To Be An Us



Now That Dream Has Faded Into Nothing More Than Mere Dust



I No Longer Urn For You



My Heart Is Already In Two



COMMENTS

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ConSpirito
ConSpirito
08:45 Dec 01 2008

Liked the rhyming scheme and the emotional sense that it conveyed. Good job, albeit a sad poem.





DarkHeartStar
DarkHeartStar
13:03 Dec 01 2008

I thought that was real good, keep it up girl.





gandalf1967
gandalf1967
16:04 Dec 01 2008

I been there








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